I like your Writing class!! I thought it is useful for me to write reports and Journal. I hadn't know details about how to write paragraph. I think I also learned about grammar through this class. I had missed plural-noun every time I wrote something before I learned it. I didn't know topic sentence! I found that I have to write topic sentence clearly not just "good" and "interesting". I think learning "funboys" is improving my writing English sentence. Before I took your class, I had misconception. I had thought it's no problem to start sentence with "funboys". I used to start sentence "with funboys" for example; I want to buy a new bag. But I don't have enough money." After I learned the rule of "funboys" from you,I can rewrite above sentence "I want to buy a new bag, but I don't have enough money." Thank you for teaching it!!
Writing 1, I liked to write about city because I could get information about city which I was interested in. I think it is appropriate 80-100words to write for paragraph1-4. Writing 2, I liked to write my opinion paragraph! I like telling my opinion to people and also like to know other people's opinion so I want to read other people's opinion paragraph !! It was difficult for me to write opinion paragraph with 80-100words. I think at least 100-120 words should be needed for me to make a good opinion paragraph.
Before we take mini tests, you gave us explaining questions which we didn't understand. It helped us, so please continue it!! I liked group activities like making story, discussing and quizzes! It was fun. You know just listening a lecture is boring, so please continue group activities next year and the year after next year!!
Thank you for giving us a lot of interesting topics and assignmenst like writing paragraph.
2011年11月15日火曜日
Journal D
I am an inventor. I invented remarkable things! Would you like to buy? ha-ha
The name of my company's new invention is Flying, Nostalgic, Edible Coffee, Treats Monster.
This is a Monster. It has 2 functions.
First, flying functions! He has flying function. He has zipper on his back. So you open the zipper and wear it, you can fly!! It can change his color because it is a monster so nobody can see you are flying.
Second, Coffee functions. He can make 2 type of special coffe!!
type 1: If you drink his coffee, you can feel nostalgic. You can recall good memorial. The effect of it is useful about 10 minutes. You are conserned that there is poison?? Don't worry! It is edible coffe. Please remember to give him information about your memorial. You can tell about it throgh letting him touch your head or putting some pictures which you want to recall on the Monster
type 2: When you are tired or have disgusting things, please call him and look his eyes for 3 seconds. He can gather your feeling and make other type of coffe. If you drink it, you can get treats. You can get power to manage trouble and things will go well.
However if you want to drink normal coffee, please tell him just "normal". He will serve you delicious coffee.
Attention!!!
Before you open his chack, please get permission to open it from the monster. If you open the chuck without saying anything, you can't wear it so you can't fly. When you open without permission by mistake, please close the chuck and say to him "I am sorry". It will be fine.
Don't interrupt him when he is making coffee. If you do such a things, the monster will serve you bad coffee.
You don't have to feed to the monster. However, if you have a good things or good day, please share the treat time with him as possible as you can. He can get energy from your happiness.
If you don't need him please return to my company.
I hope you can get alon with him and buy it.
The name of my company's new invention is Flying, Nostalgic, Edible Coffee, Treats Monster.
This is a Monster. It has 2 functions.
First, flying functions! He has flying function. He has zipper on his back. So you open the zipper and wear it, you can fly!! It can change his color because it is a monster so nobody can see you are flying.
Second, Coffee functions. He can make 2 type of special coffe!!
type 1: If you drink his coffee, you can feel nostalgic. You can recall good memorial. The effect of it is useful about 10 minutes. You are conserned that there is poison?? Don't worry! It is edible coffe. Please remember to give him information about your memorial. You can tell about it throgh letting him touch your head or putting some pictures which you want to recall on the Monster
type 2: When you are tired or have disgusting things, please call him and look his eyes for 3 seconds. He can gather your feeling and make other type of coffe. If you drink it, you can get treats. You can get power to manage trouble and things will go well.
However if you want to drink normal coffee, please tell him just "normal". He will serve you delicious coffee.
Attention!!!
Before you open his chack, please get permission to open it from the monster. If you open the chuck without saying anything, you can't wear it so you can't fly. When you open without permission by mistake, please close the chuck and say to him "I am sorry". It will be fine.
Don't interrupt him when he is making coffee. If you do such a things, the monster will serve you bad coffee.
You don't have to feed to the monster. However, if you have a good things or good day, please share the treat time with him as possible as you can. He can get energy from your happiness.
If you don't need him please return to my company.
I hope you can get alon with him and buy it.
Journal C
I respect Oda Eiichiro. In 1975, he was born in Kumamoto.
When he was 4 years old, he found the existing animator. He likes to draw some picture because of his father. His father was a painter. He liked reading comic books. Therefore he dreamed to be a cartoonist. When he was 5th grade of elementary school student, he was influenced by "captain tsubasa" which is famous comic books about soccer and he joined in soccer club. 3 years later, he decided to make a pirate story and set a goal to serialize it on "Weekly Jump" which is famous book in Japan. When he was 17, he got some awards in amateur division. 2 years later, he drop out university and became an assistant of one cartoonist. On the other hand he also made a pirate story by himself. In 1997, his work started to be serialized on "Weekly Jump". The name of comic book is "ONE PIECE"!!!!!!! Nowadays it is one of the most famous comic books and read all over the world. There is no exaggeration to say that it is one of the representations of Japanese culture!
There are three reasons why I respect him.
First, he achieved his goal which he dreamed since he was a child. He never gave up being an cartoonist. And he never changed his mind. I think it is difficult to make a living to write manga. If the manga doesn't hit, the cartoonist can't get enough money. However, Mr.Oda wasn't afraid of it. I think he didn't think about it at all. Now he can do what he wanted to do and earn money. It is amazing things!! How many people can earn money through the work which they want to do?? I think the answer is a little.
Second, ONE PIECE is attracting a lot of people all over the world because the story is pretty good! Sometimes it tells us an important things and it is useful in our life. He sends us some massages through it. I can't make such a grate story. However in the future, I want to do somethings which is attracting people and make them feel happy.
Third, he is contributing international exchange. I think some of foreigner who has interests Japan started to have interests after they read "ONE PIECE". We can talk about it with some exchange students. It is fun!!!
That's why I respect him.
Thank you!!☆(＾0＾)
When he was 4 years old, he found the existing animator. He likes to draw some picture because of his father. His father was a painter. He liked reading comic books. Therefore he dreamed to be a cartoonist. When he was 5th grade of elementary school student, he was influenced by "captain tsubasa" which is famous comic books about soccer and he joined in soccer club. 3 years later, he decided to make a pirate story and set a goal to serialize it on "Weekly Jump" which is famous book in Japan. When he was 17, he got some awards in amateur division. 2 years later, he drop out university and became an assistant of one cartoonist. On the other hand he also made a pirate story by himself. In 1997, his work started to be serialized on "Weekly Jump". The name of comic book is "ONE PIECE"!!!!!!! Nowadays it is one of the most famous comic books and read all over the world. There is no exaggeration to say that it is one of the representations of Japanese culture!
There are three reasons why I respect him.
First, he achieved his goal which he dreamed since he was a child. He never gave up being an cartoonist. And he never changed his mind. I think it is difficult to make a living to write manga. If the manga doesn't hit, the cartoonist can't get enough money. However, Mr.Oda wasn't afraid of it. I think he didn't think about it at all. Now he can do what he wanted to do and earn money. It is amazing things!! How many people can earn money through the work which they want to do?? I think the answer is a little.
Second, ONE PIECE is attracting a lot of people all over the world because the story is pretty good! Sometimes it tells us an important things and it is useful in our life. He sends us some massages through it. I can't make such a grate story. However in the future, I want to do somethings which is attracting people and make them feel happy.
Third, he is contributing international exchange. I think some of foreigner who has interests Japan started to have interests after they read "ONE PIECE". We can talk about it with some exchange students. It is fun!!!
That's why I respect him.
Thank you!!☆(＾0＾)
2011年10月18日火曜日
Journal B
I was born in 1993. Three years later I wore Kimono for the first time. The same year I entered a kinder garden. I like to make dumpling which was made of mud so I often used to have cold. When I was 5 years old I had herpes on my chest and back. After it went away I started to go to cram school. I entered a elementary school when I was 6. Next year I send love letter to one boy for the first time, but he didn't replay. I became a member of basketball club team of the school, at the age of 10. When I was 6 year student, I was chosen as captain of the team. The same year I got boyfriend for the first time. 4 months later we broke up. After I graduated from the elementary school I entered Jr. high school, and joined swimming club. I trained so hard that I could have my body shaped up. When I was 14, I was given love letter from a man, but I didn't replay......(Wow! I did same thing which he had done to me....) In 2008 A graduated from there and I was admitted to Kumamoto Kita high school. Before I entered there, I quited cram school. I joined English debate meeting competition every year from 2008 to 2010. It was very fun. When I was 16, my class presented English drama "Mammamia" in school festival. It is my good memory!!! I served as president of the school from 2009 to 2010. I challenged to take entrance examination for public academy.
In 2011 I am studying at KGU and enjoying my college life.
In 2011 I am studying at KGU and enjoying my college life.
2011年10月17日月曜日
Jounal A
When you have a lot of stress how do you release them?
Many people can solve them to sing their favorite song in Karaoke and have other way to release it.
I also go Karaoke when I fell stress stored me.
I will tell you my way to solve it.
First, I cleaned my room and make a space to move a lot.
Next, I turn off light and make my room dark like movie theater.
After that, I watch DVD which my favorite singer (Kanjyani8) appeared in it.
I imagine that I am in the concert hall. I prepare tiny light and wave it.
I sing their song together. I imitate their dance. I shake my head. Sometimes, I shake my hips!
When they say, "Hello everyone!!!!" I also say "Hello!!!!!!!" to TV.
I laugh a lot. It is so fun!!
If someone encounter the scene, he(she) think that I am crazy.
Therefore when I watch it, I have to choose the place which nobody can see.
I usually close curtain and windows.
The most exciting things of watching Kanjyani8's concert DVD is the end of it.
The end of the concert, we usually hands next person each side and wait some words.
Kanjyani8 also hands each member and say "We are a grate group!! The name is..........."
Everyone in the concert hall replays and says "Kanjyani8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The knitted people has grate power so it makes me very happy and I can forgot disgusting things.
When it comes the scene, I also says "Kanjyani8!!!!!!!!!!!" with loudly voice :)
Finally my worrying and stress fly away :)
It is good way to release stress for me and I recommend people who have a lot of stress do such a things.haha!
Many people can solve them to sing their favorite song in Karaoke and have other way to release it.
I also go Karaoke when I fell stress stored me.
I will tell you my way to solve it.
First, I cleaned my room and make a space to move a lot.
Next, I turn off light and make my room dark like movie theater.
After that, I watch DVD which my favorite singer (Kanjyani8) appeared in it.
I imagine that I am in the concert hall. I prepare tiny light and wave it.
I sing their song together. I imitate their dance. I shake my head. Sometimes, I shake my hips!
When they say, "Hello everyone!!!!" I also say "Hello!!!!!!!" to TV.
I laugh a lot. It is so fun!!
If someone encounter the scene, he(she) think that I am crazy.
Therefore when I watch it, I have to choose the place which nobody can see.
I usually close curtain and windows.
The most exciting things of watching Kanjyani8's concert DVD is the end of it.
The end of the concert, we usually hands next person each side and wait some words.
Kanjyani8 also hands each member and say "We are a grate group!! The name is..........."
Everyone in the concert hall replays and says "Kanjyani8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The knitted people has grate power so it makes me very happy and I can forgot disgusting things.
When it comes the scene, I also says "Kanjyani8!!!!!!!!!!!" with loudly voice :)
Finally my worrying and stress fly away :)
It is good way to release stress for me and I recommend people who have a lot of stress do such a things.haha!
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